From: Spike Jones (spike66@attglobal.net)
Date: Sat Oct 06 2001 - 23:15:42 MDT
> I William Wiser will@wiserlife.com wrote:
>
> > Five Thousand more dead
> > All of them children and good.
> > The old man is angry
>
> is not a formal haiku. The last line is six syllables!:)
But his last line sounded better than
"The old man is pissed."
I too, do haiku,
But you knew i do haiku.
Do you do haiku?
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